Despite the halved length, the eighth volume of Serenity covers a fair amount of ground. The previous volume’s issues are resolved, an entirely new development begins and ends, and then we have a good piece of the story of Esther. How well this is done is up for grabs.
I also have to note that I think the art has improved slightly. Either the artist is getting used to the simplified style or I am. However, I felt that a number of the expressions were a bit off, which is unfortunate given the subject matter.
This volume wraps up the angel story in a relatively low-key fashion. Having God intervene in this type of story is always a difficult move, as it feels fairly cheap in any story about doubt or hardship. Plus, it’s hard for people to criticize you without opening themselves up to a variety of comments. At least this experience isn’t life-changing and instead leads up to a relapse into worse behavior, which is quite realistic.
For a moment I was surprised when Tim and Eddie began arguing about baptism. They actually bring up issues like biblical literalism and for a moment I thought interesting territory would be covered, but it turns into a shouting match and that (rather edgy) line of thought is abandoned. Unfortunate but expected. At the end Serenity is left alone, which is sadly another common experience for young Christians.
As for the other major plot arc, involving Eddie’s background and his relationship with Serenity… here I tread on less certain ground. I really can’t comment on his fantasies around school and I have a difficult time articulating what feels off about the entire date scene. Though I disliked it overall, it didn’t commit any horrible offenses. It also fleshes out the cast, which is the meat of any series like this.
We also have an increase in the referential factor. There is a page that is reminiscent of the worst of comic book narration – not an unintelligent joke, but it didn’t work for me. Inuyasha also makes an appearance (plus we had a Naruto cameo in the last volume) so the anime factor is up. Lastly, I find the premise of a magazine entitled “Teen Xtians” interesting.
Meanwhile we have the story of Esther, drawn in a rather different style. Tim is flexing his genre muscle, I suppose. Interestingly, it just includes the first part, not the story of Haman, which is an unusual choice but may just be for the sake of space.
The main question for any telling of this story is how directly they’re going to address the sexual aspect. Serenity answers that question with a resounding mumble. On one hand, it seems to dance around the issue (and would Xerxes really have been “sigh, I suppose” about all of this?) but Esther’s speech in the palace addresses the issue more clearly. While it’s not a bad portrayal of this book of the Bible, it isn’t anything that hasn’t been done before. I also can’t help but think it would have been more symbolic if Eddie had been king, but it appears the two halves of the book are unconnected.
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